(Another piece of coursework from yours truly, this piece was originally written just over two and a half years ago and has since evolved and been reshaped so many times now that it barely even resembles the original. For my final draft of the coursework, I decided to change the narrative - from a piece that was originally told in first person, I decided to experiment and change it to third, which worked so well that I kept it like that when I handed it in. Enjoy!!)
As
surely as trees must lose their leaves in autumn, she knew deep down in the
very depths of her heart that this was to be goodbye.
Goodbye.
Such
a simple word. Such a simple, and so frequently used shard of icy venom that
could penetrate even the warmest of nights with its sadistic connotations – if
used incorrectly, it could be this word that tears a person’s sane
consciousness into one thousand miniscule irreplaceable pieces.
It
had always been them – never the both of them specifically, but they shared the
same group of friends, so that was good enough for her. Maybe the two of them
were not necessarily the closest of a pair, but they were both the so-called
‘different’ ones: alternative rock music chosen over the mainstream music of
their friends, the musicians, and the ones who would be found having the ‘deep
and so-called meaningful’ conversations about life, the universe and
everything. He had always been there, admittedly, however his attention was
hardly ever directed specifically at her, but she could always count on the arrival
of his skinny jeans and faded black converse trainers to brighten up the dull
days that were drawing their era to a close. However, not even seeing him in
any of those clothes could heighten her mood. This was to be goodbye, maybe not
for the rest of their friends, but certainly for her: he’d always said that a
clean break was best in any situation of goodbye, and she unwillingly had to
agree.
So
here they are: in the present. They walk as a group for probably the final time
through the town park, laughing as he kicks his way through piles of leaves,
the way they scatter in every direction a harsh yet accurate allegory for the
beginning of their own separate futures, she muses. For a moment there, she
could have sworn that he caught her eyes in the rush of laughter. He sees her
sad smile as the ice blue of his eyes meet her own chocolate brown coloured
ones, but turn away quicker than the time taken to decipher - let alone notice
- the very reason they’re glazed over with glistening dew. They continue their walk, and she can’t help
but drink in these short glimpses of him, with that hair that reminds her so
much of her favourite musician, who, ironically is his too. ‘Face it’ she
thinks to herself. ‘We both know that we’ve got too much in common to ever be
able to be anything more than friends.’
When
they finally reach the station, she knows that the time is truly up. She can’t
help but hope he’ll be happy at whichever stop he gets off at. He wasn’t here.
Everyone
takes a turn saying goodbye. As they do so the disassociation inside her and
the reality of the situation she never wanted to face begins to mount up. When
he reaches her, she manages to force a smile despite everything she’s promised
herself. ‘Obviously, it would be too much to ask for a hug,’ she thinks to
herself, and instead waves and wishes him the best. Now that’s he’s so close to leaving, she
realises that a return is near enough to impossible.
It’s
too late to say anything more to him now: and the reality that yet again she’s
wasted her final chance to say something, anything to him. She stands with
them, watching as he boards the train that will take him forever away from her
and remembers one of the only things that he had ever said that had really
stuck out in her mind.
“If
you think about it, there are six, maybe even seven billion people on this
earth. So what does that mean then? Meaning at least three billion of the
opposite sex out there. One hundred million, or even more, of our specific age
range. So surely, surely there is one
person out there who is perfect for you in every way, shape or form. It just
takes time to find them.”
She
repeats these seemingly reassuring ghosts to herself over and over as he boards
the train, and takes a last long look into his eyes: those perfect blue eyes
that he always despised, describing the colour as an un-natural
anomaly of nature. Silently, she protested. To her, that last image was
perfect. Him: standing typical as ever in those clothes that they both loved,
leaning out and waving his goodbyes, his eyes almost gracing hers with their
faultless gaze. Almost.
‘I
want to remember you like this.’
The
train is gone when she opens her eyes once more. She turns and follows the
others out of the station, a fragile empty shell of what she had been mere
moments before. It felt to her almost as if he had taken her soul away with him
on that train. The ghosts of their footsteps still lingering on the gravel
pathway that leads through the park: dancing tantalisingly around the bereaved
group of friends that she no longer truly feels a part of. What had before been
the route of companions and friendship was now shadowed by loneliness, and the
fear of a life lived in solitude for the rest of its eternity.
A
chill wind lifts her dull hair, whipping it around her face and into her eyes
so that her vision becomes distorted, and for a moment she sees a glimpse of
reality in an alternate way. A different time, and a different girl. But him,
always the same person. A reality that this heartbreaking goodbye had somehow
bypassed. The image disappears in the same amount of time that it would take
for a heartbeat to pass, and the path once again becomes laced with the shadows
of uncertainty in front of her.
Autumn
was over. Winter had begun.
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