Tuesday 22 January 2013 0 comments

Chapter Two


(Find Chapter One here)


The storm continues throughout the next two weeks. We go back to school, all a little disheartened at the thought of returning to lessons and exams. There’s a constant, non-stop rain pattering on the window of the maths classroom as I drift off into a daydream during a boring lecture about ‘why simultaneous equations are so important to us.’ I’m almost at the point of closing my eyes and falling asleep when suddenly I hear a screaming noise. I jerk upright, only to see nothing at all, for the bulbs in the room have gone out and the grey sky outside doesn’t do anything in the way of light.

“Oh dear, class. It seems we have a power cut. Stay here whilst I go and check with the headmaster. Anyone caught out of their seat will receive a detention, do you understand?” The voice of Mr Parson, the maths teacher still sounds more like a drone, even when something as drastic as a power cut has taken place. There’s the slam of a door as he leaves and a swell of chatter resumes. I look around in the darkness trying to make out shapes. As my eyes adjust, I can faintly see the outlines of the rest of the students in my class and can just about make out trees outside the window, but nothing more, as it seems that the street lights have also perished. A sudden burst of lightning illuminates the window frame making me jump half a foot off my chair. Seeing as I’m sitting next to the window, I seem to be the only one that has actually noticed the large hooded figure that’s standing underneath the tree nearest the school. I can’t exactly make out any specific features, other than the wispy fluid black cloak that obscures its features, giving no clue to the identity. If I was to liken it to anything, I’d say that it looks like one of the dementors in Harry Potter. Only this dementor is a lot darker and a lot more chilling than them, and one of the first thoughts that flashes into my head at the sight of it is admiration to the person wearing it for being able to produce a thoroughly realistic costume. I see it right in the centre of my vision for a mere second, but the very sight of it sends another chill up my spine, and that’s when it crosses my mind that Halloween isn’t for another month and a half yet. Suddenly, a wave washes over my eyes, followed by a flashback: a very vivid, unrealistic vision, distorted in my memories. It is a memory, but then again it isn’t – because with memories I’m pretty certain it isn’t possible to remember things in such clear multi-sensory detail as I am with this one.

I’m standing, once again, on the edge of the pit. The clearing is sharper, a more focused and detailed scene, with colours more vivid than any I’ve ever seen naturally. I see Sam, followed strangely enough by myself standing at the other end. We, (as it seems to be) are standing at opposite ends, within shouting distance, but only just. I watch as Sam picks up a pebble; see him throw it into the mist that’s emanating from the pit. We laugh and I stay motionless, acknowledging the fact that this must be merely a dream, knowing that whatever is about to happen won’t affect me in any way other than severely freaking me out. I know what’s coming and hope beyond anything that the chilling cold tendrils that begin to emanate from the pit can’t affect me in this dream-like state. Sam drops the rock in, the mist around it curling and creeping upwards as it falls. I wait, anticipating the moment that the noise begins and sure enough, the rocks begin to plummet underneath and I watch the two people on the other side of the clearing begin to run. It all seems to be happening so quickly now, I could have sworn that the actual event had dragged on, but seeing it again makes me realise that in reality, the whole thing must have taken place in barely seconds.

And so I’m standing here, watching the figures of myself and my best friend dart off into the distance. It seems weird, like I’m suspended in some weird sense of anticipation. I look down properly at the pit, given that in this strange delusion, I’m not affected in the same way by it as I was in reality. I’m just staring down at the shapes the smoke makes as it begins to curl skywards, when I’m caught off guard by something completely unexpected. What comes next both shocks my senses and at the same time satisfies the suspicions of my memories. I hear the laughter that I’ve been plagued by since the first moment I heard it. At least I know now that it hasn’t been a complete figment of my imagination...  but what I see next completely screws with each of my senses. There’s something rising out of the smoke. I know deep inside that I should be scared and maybe I am, but the memory seems to be playing with my emotions and right now I can’t feel anything besides a complete feeling of numbness and detachment from the dream. The thing rising continues, as does the ever-so-familiar laughter. I look towards it, however the more and more I concentrate on its ascending form, the less focused the thing becomes. Even with this unusual cloaking method, I can just about make out that it’s a definite object. A hand.

It’s almost definitely not a human hand either. The digits are hooked, with curling claws at the end of every finger, and dry rotting flesh covering the withered bones. Somehow, I’ve got no doubts that the owner of the hand and the laughter are the same; human or otherwise. It seems so clear to me right now, so defined. I’m even pretty certain that the thing under the tree is in some way connected to this disembodied hand, if not the same being again. The hand continues to rise and I watch the arm that’s attached to it, and see that this too is cloaked in a black shroud-like garment. I stare, watching the arm slowly ascend, but something that seems far far away interrupts the image. With a sudden, unexpected, sharp prod in the arm, I return with a jolt to the present.

“Anna?” The voice is distant, but there’s no mistaking the worried tone of Sam, along with many others from my class at school.

“Oh God. Did I faint?” It’s light again, wait… no, someone’s shining a torch in my face. I squint a little and they take the torch away, so I can look around. I’m still in the classroom and the lights are still off, however now I realise I’m no longer sat in my chair and have somehow made it to the carpeted floor. Sam is kneeling down beside me, his hand on my forehead and a concerned look on his face.

“Yeah, you fainted. Think it must have been the lightning. But you hit your head on the way down and I was just… checking you’re all right.” He says this last part slowly, as if he’s got some kind of a hidden motive. I sit up so that my head is level with his and look around. Even Mr Parson, who’s now back in the room, looks worried. As I take in the faces of my other friends I notice that they too are wearing anxious and concerned expressions. Something about the way they’re standing back from me makes me feel uneasy.

“Well class, the headmaster has decided that considering it’s already the afternoon, and it doesn’t look much like the power will be going on again anytime soon, you may all leave lessons early today. Just please make use of this afternoon off... I’m expecting this exercise and the next one finished by next lesson, okay?” Mr Parson opens the door and I notice his eyes following me as I leave with Sam and the rest of our friends.

“You wanna come back to mine?” Sam asks me. “Get in a bit of extra band practice? Oh shit, we’re going to need electric, aren’t we?”

“Acoustic session?” I venture weakly. Sam nods eagerly, and pulls out his phone to contact the others. The four of us: Me, Sam, Dylan and Felix, all belong in a band based in Sam’s garage. We play gigs and enter competitions, but so far ‘The Limit’ have yet to win any award – or recording contract for that matter. In the midst of a chaotic crowd of excitable year sevens fleeing their classrooms, Sam suggests that we wait around outside the entrance of school for the other two.  When they finally emerge, everyone looks thoroughly thrilled at the prospect of an afternoon off school. The boys walk back to Sam’s and I trail along afterwards in silence, still mulling over the hand in the mist.

We reach his house and everyone else flits into the garage to set up and drag out the dusty old piano from underneath several stacks of old Kerrang magazines. I stay in the familiar kitchen and pour myself a drink, all the while feeling a little disassociated from the rest of them. For the first time in years, I feel ever so slightly alone in the midst of everything. But I’m not.

“Hey, you alright?” It’s Sam and this question doesn’t half shock me. I thought the kitchen was empty.

“I’m… I’m fine thanks. How’s the piano? Can’t even remember the last time we had it out...” My voice breaks on the last sentence and I collapse in a wave of tears in Sam’s arms. The shock and fearful emotions of the last two weeks have just come spilling out, after building up to bursting point. It was the sudden black-out that did it and the vision that completely pushed my mind to the limits. I cry into Sam’s neck and he strokes my hair, completely confused by my sudden outburst. I don’t think he’s ever seen me cry properly before, other than at stupid sad movies, but it’s a testament to our friendship that he doesn’t seem too freaked out by it.

“Whoa Anna… what’s wrong? Are you all right? Tell me.” He puts me down on the cold tiles and sits opposite me, legs crossed. I lift up my head and see his worried expression, a permanent feature these days. He pulls a wad of tissue from the kitchen surface and hands it to me. I don’t even feel the usual electric tingle of excitement as my hand strokes Sam’s.

“I saw…” I sniff and hold back the tears that threaten to reappear and moment. “I saw something really freaky, when the lightning flashed. There… there was a figure. It was all black and sc… scary. Then I had a flashback to that day by the pit.” I wipe my eyes, seeing Sam’s expression change again. He’s alert, as if my words have sparked some kind of a reaction. I respond to this, feeling braver about telling the true story. The tears have stopped, so I wipe my eyes again with the sleeve of my school jumper and venture on. 

“But it was different. I saw us; saw everything like I was watching from the opposite side to the one we were on. When you threw that last stone in, Sam, there was something different. I saw… a hand. A hand came up out of the pit.” There’s a moment of silence, in which the tension mounting up in my brief summary of that chilling dream seems so thick that you could cut it with a knife. After taking this in for a minute or two, Sam draws breath and begins to speak again.

“Oh.” He says quietly.

“What?” I ask, annoyed with the simplicity of his response. Sam sighs again and continues.

“When you fainted, you weren’t exactly silent or sill for that matter. You started to shout things. Just mumbling at first, but soon enough you were properly shouting stuff and twitching. Parson thought you were having a fit or something.”

“What did I say?” I cut in, not remembering saying or hearing.  It makes sense though, considering the cautious responses that Mr Parson and the rest of the class had demonstrated when I came around again, and the fact that I found myself on the classroom floor.

“You mumbled something about colour and…” His voice trails off and I stare into his blue eyes, searching for the answer. He sighs and begins to speak again.

“…and then you said that you knew that death was coming for you. And here’s the strangest part Anna. Your voice went all weird, like you were…” he hesitates and I look forcefully at him, as if willing him to carry on will make him. But he doesn’t pause for long and continues “possessed or something. You said something about the sky being on fire, but darkness was coming at the same time. It started off all weird with something like ‘the Dark Assembly will rise again-‘

‘’and when the ground has turned to ash and the sky to flames, only she can make the choice to destroy or conquer the Darkness, before a new age for humanity dawns.” I finish for him. I’m not exactly sure where these words are coming from, they just seem to be tumbling out of my mouth and there’s nothing I can do to stop myself. When I finally trail off into a confused silence, Sam gives me another curious look.

 “Anna what’s wrong with you recently. First you start acting all detached and quiet and now this? Is there something wrong with you Anna, are you on something? I mean, who the hell are the Dark Assembly? They sound like some kind of cheesy 80’s TV show villains.” I sit there in silent shock, not wanting to believe that my best friend thinks that I’m going crazy. My stomach seems to have flipped, almost in anticipation. I’m confused.

That moment of silence is the longest; the atmosphere between the two of us seeming thicker than it’s ever been between us before. I’ve never before even felt close to tense around Sam. He looks towards me and I rack my brains. The Dark Assembly? For starters I don’t think I’ve ever even heard of such a thing – I wonder if my subconscious mind has picked it up from a video game or comic book or something, but Sam would have known that, considering the amount of time he spends on his PlayStation. It scares me, the thought of having been possessed by some unnatural force. Am I going crazy? It’s this that frightens me even more than the memory of the dream. I began to pull myself up, with a new trail of thoughts formulating in my head. The mysterious shadow in the field during the power cut; the strange hand and mass of wispy dark shadow that followed in the vision. I’m feeling almost ninety-nine percent certain that the hand from the pit and the creature under the tree were the same thing. I don’t know why, but they both had the same black, empty shrouds covering their… I’m assuming body.  But who, or rather, what exactly were they? And more importantly, why have they suddenly surfaced at the same time my mind throws up a mysterious phrase I don’t ever recall having heard before?

“You know what’d completely make you feel better.” He finally says after what seems like a long period of consideration, his voice a lot softer than it had been, as if he could sense that what he’d just queried had hit a raw nerve. “Kicking the shit out of some old classics. I’m thinking Foo Fighters; maybe a bit of Queen – like all the feel good stuff. We’ve got the piano out, so you wanna try that dodgy acoustic Don’t Stop Me Now again? Come on.”

He stands up, and extends his hand down to me. I take it, and he grabs the other one and pulls me up – perhaps a little too forcefully, and into a hug. We stand there for a moment, and I’m lost in the depths of guy scent.

“Your shampoo smells so nice.” I mumble into a mouthful of his hair.

“You always say that.” He laughs softly in response.

“It does.” I protest, pulling away. “I swear guys aren’t meant to smell this good. You should smell of like mud and guy stuff.”

“Yeah, and also I should be out playing football and have crappy messy hair like I did back in year eight... Would you rather I was like that?”

“You were nice back then.” I laugh at him. He shoves me gently.

“Oi. You were the one who told me to start straightening my hair.” He flops his fringe down over his eyes to demonstrate.

“Yeah, and it’s your fault you got addicted. Honestly, you’re as bad as most of the girls in our year.” I knew that’d provoke a response, and still underneath the fringe, he makes a face.
                                                                                   
“Eurgh, like I’d wanna have my hair look anything like that anyway. Looks like it’s been burned alive.” He flicks his fringe out of his eyes. I love that flick.

“Sam... Answer me honestly, okay? Did everyone all hear me back there in class? Do they all think I’m a complete freak or something?” I ask.

“No more than usual.” He reassures me, grabbing me again in a massive bear hug.

“Uh guys.” Comes a voice behind us. We turn to see Dylan and Felix leaning on the door into the garage watching us, arms crossed. “Sorry to interrupt the moment here, but are we playing tonight or what? Some of us have got places to be later.” Dylan’s already holding his bass, and I can tell by the way his hands are twitching over the strings that he’s eager to play. Even if there’s no electricity.

“Oh what, another date with Madison?” Sam calls. Dylan grins wickedly.

“Told her she could stop by here on her way to mine. That okay?” He asks Sam.

 “No, sorry mate. No girls allowed in band practice.” Sam calls back, and he sneaks a wink in my direction as we head towards the garage door. I hit him again, and for what seems to be the millionth time, we disappear off together into the garage.

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Another Little Note

YAAAAAY!!! My Twitter account reached 500 followers!! And in celebration of this fantastic achievement first of all, I would like to send out a heartfelt note of thanks to each and every single one of you for just being there and giving me and the blog a chance. (This is beginning to sound like the beginning of a very dodgy Oscars acceptance speech...) I honestly could not have had some of the motivation and encouragement to carry on without all of you. So as the blog nears 2,000 views - for something that has been in existence for barely six months, I find this a pretty amazing feat - I will keep my promise and let all of you out there read the second chapter of my (still untitled) book.

Some words of explanation before I post it though... For all of you who have read Chapter One, Chapter Two will be a completely different kettle of fish. Whereas in the first chapter (which is indeed one of my favourites) Anna and Sam are launched straight away into the action of discovering the pit, chapter two takes on a much more relaxed pace - which I used as a chance to give you a further insight into the lives of these two characters. So whereas you're not necessarily getting the action and suspense of Chapter One, you're getting all the integral background information instead.

So here it is for you all, the next post I'm posting will be the complete version of Chapter Two. Like it? Let me know, I'm always up for any kind of feedback - good or bad - that you're willing to throw at me. Oh, and my next goal? 1,000 followers. 1,000 followers for Chapter Three. So remember, if you're interested, feel free to share me with your friends, enemies, next-door neighbour's dog, whoever. And once again, thank you all so much, I hope you enjoy this next chapter. :)

Peace. x


Monday 7 January 2013 2 comments

City Of Dreams (A Writing Burst)

(Another writing burst, inspired by the creation of a 'city of dreams.' I decided to subvert this idea in my piece and channel some of the experimental ideas we have also recently been studying. This writing burst took a much darker more pessimistic angle and I wanted to play around with the layout and formatting to see how this could affect the mood of the piece.) 

The city of my dreams is not a city.
The city of my dreams is not a city.
The city of my dreams is not a city.

Over and over until the words blur into a meaningless dirge and the letters become black squiggly lines on a stark white page. The noise of the voice inside your head reading becomes a drone, and the words melt into a constant stream of nonsensical syllables.

Cities = people.

People = lies.
People = corruption
               hatred
               deception
               greed
               anger.

               Filthy human scum.

A city becomes on principle a manifestation of these things clustered together in a shitty dingy over-populated lump. The widest scope of skins, wealth, opinions, occupations, politics conceivable. One would assume that such a variety of offerings would create a utopian society, yet still things exist in a negative state. The garbage of upper class snobbery barely inches away from underprivileged dreams of breaking free from this laborious hierarchy. Where vermin runs freely around everywhere the eye can see - and I'm not talking about pigeons and rodents.

"Endless possibilities." They say. "So many fresh new opportunities" the false billboard prophets promise. Equal, limitless opportunities for everyone? Not in this society. Not in this day and age. Not for everyone.

   Lies.


Thursday 3 January 2013 0 comments

HOLD THE FRONT PAGE EVERYONE, I'VE HAD SOME INSPIRATION!!

Inspiration, for me at least, comes in two major forms. The first is the mediocre task of thinking to myself: "well, this needs to go somewhere, I wonder..." and after some long and careful consideration I arrive at the conclusion of "I like the sound of that idea: that's going in." Comparatively boring in regards to my recent "OH MY GOSH, I'VE JUST HAD A CRAZY/AMAZING/FANTASTIC/INSERT-GENERIC-OR-OTHERWISE-ADJECTIVE-HERE WHICH WILL ALMOST CERTAINLY GET ME NOTICED AND PUBLISHED FOR SURE IDEA!!!!!!" - the other type of inspiration.

And it is with that same excitable tone that I can inform you all out there that Book Numero Deux - the sequel to the as-yet untitled first book - has just begun its journey from brain to page. Yes, it may only be simple snippets of conversation and a beginning of an end, but officially in my eyes the writing process has begun. The very beginning and end of the book are the only parts which have been set in stone, the journey there is still a work in progress. All I will reveal about it is that I intend for the plot to take a much darker tone than the events of the first one...

And that is as much of a blog post as you're getting today, I'm afraid dear readers: that last minute uni work is calling to me from the dusty bowels of my still-unpacked suitcase. Look out for more frequent posts from now on however - the paper copy is back in my possession which means MORE EDITING!!! Oh and in addition to that, I'm only 17 Twitter followers away from 500; things are getting so close to Chapter Two now, keep your eyes peeled for that too. Sharing and feedback always appreciated. :)

Peace. x


 
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